Paying Attention

When I write poems in poetry writing class, am I paying attention or just doodling with words? It feels like what I write is irrelevant, my mind wandering on my experiences. Here’s two short ones I wrote today.

An Elegy for Belly Fat

The gut is gone, security lost;

I slouch in my chair,

with nowhere

to place my hands.

They used to rest

below my chest,

on my lost soft mess of flesh.

 

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The coffee’s gone,

my morning’s done;

life is sad,

just like that.

I cannot wait,

until the date

my mug’s refilled,

when

frail happiness

is rebuilt.

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